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Sun, Children Drawing, Image, Drawing

The sun above us in the sky provides for life on earth each day. It’s like a big hot apple pie that shines a slice of warmth our way. We thank God for each streaming ray that awakens the morning eye. In sleep, in work, in rest and play the smiling old sun passes by. 2/5/20 Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina

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Date: 2/16/2020 6:42:00 PM
Heartwarming (no pun intended) Janis! Love the artwork too. Makes me want a slice of that "big, hot apple pie" in the middle of Winter's chill! Congrats on your win. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 1:06:00 PM
I would be delighted to have a slice of that apple pie :) Very nice, Janis. Congrats on your win! Charlie
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Date: 2/5/2020 4:30:00 PM
My kind of poem, short, simple and light. Great job Janice. Good luck!
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Date: 2/6/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. It was good to hear from you...

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