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The Smile On Your Face

~ A blushing sky this morning found my mind a different place Salmon swirls and indigo, horizons come to trace The beauty of this autumn dawn, an evening to replace Yet still my eyes they only see the smile on your face ~

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Date: 11/15/2019 12:09:00 AM
So much natural beauty will never fill your heart the way the love who stands before you will. Breathtaking, Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Hope it made you smile. :)
Date: 11/14/2019 12:47:00 PM
A lovely poem Chris, I enjoyed your first line "A blushing sky this morning" A co-incidence? We had a blushing sky yesterday evening - it was just as the sun was setting, it changed from golden rusty color to a dusky pink, I remember remarking about it to my husband who also thought it was unusual! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer and another coincidence..our sunset was even more beautiful than the sunrise last night. Isn't it amazing how nature provides such beauty and inspiration. I truly appreciate your visit and comment today.
Date: 11/14/2019 11:15:00 AM
Loved this one Chris, salmon swirls and indigo, priceless imagery, glad to read this one, picked up my mood!
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Date: 11/14/2019 11:51:00 AM
I'm happy it did John. Thanks for the nice comment, it helped with my mood as well
Date: 11/14/2019 10:40:00 AM
This is gorgeous my friend. I love how you paint the horizons. So real I could see it unfolding. Love this :)
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Date: 11/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
It was gorgeous (yesterday) : ) Thanks so much Sandy, I am a sucker for a beautiful sunrise and a beautiful smile. : )
Date: 11/14/2019 10:40:00 AM
I can visualize the poet in you tracing the horizon with your eyes! <3
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Kim. That is such a nice thing to say.
Date: 11/14/2019 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Line. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 11/14/2019 10:18:00 AM
This brings me a smile today. Very nice! Thank you Chris :)
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Date: 11/14/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I am happy this one made you smile.
Date: 11/14/2019 8:30:00 AM
Chris, this poem has smiles written all over it. Great poetry my friend. Charlie
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.

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