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The Smash of God

I have been here before awake in this dream of fitheavy amorphic darkness full of war parting stars into silent tremor dust sea… to feel the smash of god beneath the waves the heave of lung cold and gray heavy as the day caught in teeth of a sky broken-jawed and soft as fire

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Date: 5/21/2025 2:36:00 PM
Exeptional write. "broken-jawed and soft as fire" - so deep
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 5/21/2025 7:01:00 PM
thank you paige, i hope you are doing well
Date: 5/21/2025 3:08:00 AM
Dear Matt, you always have a way with words, this is no exception! I absolutely love the depth of your poem especially how youve written "caught in teeth of a sky broken-jawed and soft as fire" love that! So creative and unique! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 5/21/2025 10:06:00 AM
and to you as well - thank you

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