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The Slave and the Sparrow

Time had sewn, And we had wrought, Against a force Seldom fought, And we had dreamt, And we had dreamed, Of a world Ever serene, And we had run, And we had ran, As if we could arrive At such a land, And the world was one Grey with gloom, The old slave Bent over the loom, As a tear shed from His face, We were yet to Beat him with a mace, And a tear shed From my face, And a tear shed From your face, Our freedom; Only in death, Our joy; Only in sorrow, Thy come a sparrow From the old wood; A torn sparrow From the old wood, Among the grass It was contained; Among the green grass It was contained, Its beak broken; Its wings only silt, The young sparrow Presented us guilt, And through the wind It blew away, And through the wind It flew to fly, Arise from death, Into the the fair day; And a phoenix Had flown away. Our freedom; Only in death, Our joy; Only in sorrow.

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Date: 1/26/2014 7:54:00 PM
Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. Interesting write.
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Date: 1/25/2014 11:21:00 AM
you can't have one without the other.. Love the write Charlotte, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2014 3:12:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Charlotte - I choose your first great poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlotte Nickerson
Date: 1/24/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thank you for such words of encouragement concerning the poem.
Date: 1/23/2014 11:38:00 PM
Charlotte, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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