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The Sky, a Star, a Kiss

To be in love when eyes meet in the dawn as the day will stay with us on its own to give our new love a gift to pass on this kiss of love, we'll reap what we have sown the sky will grow dark and the day will pass to let a star weep a tear of true glee when each kiss will turn to feel what will last the sky, a star, a kiss they are all free this gift we give to this our real true love that we will hold as a gem in our hand like the soft cries from the beak of a dove fall on our ears as we lay in the sand To be in love at the dawn of the day The time will pass and the warm kiss will stay

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Date: 10/3/2023 6:56:00 AM
This is really a profound and breathtaking sonnet, oh my, truly beautiful with delicate hues of poetical magic and reflecting a kind of love that stays forever, till eternity..You've so delicately woven a tapestry of myriad emotions within your graceful wordsmithery and I can't help but FAVE this write.. So many beautiful lines here "to let a star weep a tear of true glee", "the sky, a star, a kiss they are all free", "this kiss of love, we'll reap what we have sown" Ahh really amazing, loved it
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Date: 10/2/2023 10:50:00 PM
Wow you’ve written a sonnet for this prompt! How effortlessly and seamlessly your words flow, as i read this it feels like you didnt have to try hard but it came naturally for you. So beautiful and those rhymes are profound! “to let a star weep a tear of true glee” “ the sky, a star, a kiss they are all free“ love that the most! The imagery and depth of love expressed is so heart touching. A fave for me! You’ve really nailed it
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Date: 10/2/2023 2:48:00 PM
WoW! Frederic, This is such an endearing love poem. To find love and be in love is such a beautiful. I found your write to be romantic dreamy and well-written. You write sonnets on any topic very well. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/2/2023 1:38:00 PM
"To be in love (still) at the dawn of the day .." So dreamy. Love the title too
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Date: 10/2/2023 1:36:00 PM
- How wonderful you write this, Frederic ... to be in love.... I hope it will be a top win in the contest ... gl :) - hugs
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