Get Your Premium Membership

The Sky

Looking at the sky today There was white clouds shown Only one huge layers of whiteness The sky was covered in white From far as the eye can see It was ice with the snow It was melting raindrops The raindrops poured to earth Then as quickly it began to fall The raindrops soon stopped Washing some snow away Onto the ground everywhere Sometimes the clouds spread Showing patches of blues making the small clouds look Like mountains and islands Appear to look like ice Melting from the water.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/23/2021 6:23:00 AM
You certainly have an eye for the weather Darlene, ‘‘tis no mean achievement being able to describe it, creating this image of pristine nature, cheers David
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2021 3:51:00 PM
Hello David Kavanagh, thank you David I try to do my bestto describe the weather. Cheers Darlene
Date: 1/20/2021 6:57:00 PM
You do express this so well. Superb!
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2021 10:06:00 AM
Hello Akkina, thank you Akkina I often look to the sky to see the clouds. At night I try to see the moon. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 1/20/2021 5:33:00 PM
Love the imagery...Ice clouds in the Sky.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2021 10:08:00 AM
Hello Michaell Arturo, yes ice clouds in the sky. sometimes I see other things. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 1/20/2021 12:14:00 PM
That sure is a vivid description, Darlene! Nature must be happy with the attention you give her! Regards // paul
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2021 4:16:00 PM
Hello Paul Callus, I do think that nature is happy with this attention i give her. she always changes. Regards Darlene.
Date: 1/19/2021 9:00:00 PM
You are so great at observation and expressing it Hugs, Pangie
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2021 10:57:00 AM
Hello Panagiota ,thank you Panagiota. Hugs Darlene
Date: 1/19/2021 1:47:00 PM
Nicely done Darlene. Beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2021 3:04:00 PM
Hello Judy, thank you so much for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening myfriend.
Date: 1/19/2021 12:50:00 AM
Beautiful scenery, well described; it's easy to see all of this. Wonderful read.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2021 7:15:00 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, thank you M.L. Kiser, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 1/18/2021 7:21:00 PM
Darlene well wishes :) you amaze with every read. Look forward to getting in touch
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2021 7:14:00 AM
Hello Gerald, I just sent you a Soup mail. I also look forward in getting in touch. I am glad you are back. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 1/18/2021 9:55:00 AM
wow love this. i'm so inspired great visuals a fav, Take care. Pete.X
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2021 10:05:00 AM
Hello Peter, I am pleased you like this poem. Take care. Darlene.X
Date: 1/17/2021 12:53:00 PM
It sounds like a gorgeous sky Darlene.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2021 6:12:00 AM
Hello Caren,it is to me. Today the sky is all white. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene
Date: 1/17/2021 6:36:00 AM
Hi Darlene. This is beautiful! I really enjoyed this. I watch the sky often. I have many windows and being on the hill here, I have beautiful views of the sky in winter when the leaves fall. Well done :)
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2021 10:41:00 AM
Hello Heidi, you are so lucky to have so many views to I also watch the sky often. Thank you forthe lovely comment. Hugs Darlene
Date: 1/16/2021 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful expression and imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2021 5:47:00 AM
Hello Judy Ball, thank you Judy. I love nature scenes. Enjoy your day my friend. thank you for the lovely comment.
Date: 1/16/2021 2:28:00 PM
Darlene you have a great eye for envisioning things, I can see it well through your beautiful perspective. Thank you for giving me something lovely to imagine today, Blessings, xo
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/16/2021 3:24:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose Rose, Mystic Rose tose, i always see different shapes in the clouds also when the sky is comply white. There is always someting to see in the sky. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 1/16/2021 12:15:00 PM
This is imagery at its best. I love nature and its skies. Well written. ~~
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/16/2021 3:26:00 PM
hello victor, yes nature is the best. I also love nature and the skies. Always something to see. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things