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one eye opens a sunrise messy hair sleepy eyes pearly whites brush brand new leave the house a quarter to i meet her in a small cafe she deftly holds my hand a pretty country girl blue eyes and nicely tanned she walks seductively to our favorite table I'll reach out and kiss her just as soon as i am able date:9/5/22

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Date: 10/21/2022 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this romantic winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Meru Groen
Date: 10/25/2022 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Sara, always a pleasure to hear from you!
Date: 10/19/2022 1:56:00 PM
I love this! Congratulations on your win!
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Meru Groen
Date: 10/25/2022 8:02:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment, I appreciate it!
Date: 10/19/2022 2:41:00 AM
The Simple Life - is simply great. Congratulations!
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Meru Groen
Date: 10/25/2022 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Chris, and you are as well!
Date: 10/18/2022 3:05:00 PM
You got me with "A pretty country girl-blue eyed and nicely tanned" (lol) You did this form so well, Geru. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Meru Groen
Date: 10/25/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie, always a pleasure to join the fun in your great contests!

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