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The Silent KISS Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France

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The Silent KISS

A surprise silent kiss is to be cherished.  – by poet.,

It was evidently inescapable.
     Certainly I did not expect it at the time.

The railway station was over crowded
I was patiently waiting for my sister to arrive.
           She was supposed to wear a purple dress.
           So when I saw the dress I assumed
My sister had finally arrived. I hurried
And gave her one big hug and a silent kiss.

Where upon the stranger turned and uttered a yell.
She was not my sister and I had grabbed someone else.
        For a moment no one dared to breathe or move.
        I looked at her beautiful face, finely chiseled,
"Well, well, well," she said. "You owe me big, a dinner tonight."
I smiled. We agreed on an Italian diner.
We ordered oysters, followed by a grilled swordfish.
And a tiramisu, laced with a famous Barolo.
     It was incredible how we became so fine friends.

We agreed on meeting again. As we came to part
     I took her in my arms and it was a long silent kiss.

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La France Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my The Silent Kiss contest with your beautiful poem, I love the image and quote, blessings ~Constance
George Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:12 AM
Enjoyed this beautiful story of hot romance once more. Congratulations on your first place win.
Williams Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 7:51 AM
Dearest Victor, this made me smile its so you. From a mix-up at the station to tiramisu and a kiss — fate clearly has a sense of humor! A great story my friend...Hugs
Godwin Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:47 PM
How romantic! The movies couldn't do it better than your poem did. Yours went from fine friends to a long silent kiss so I'm thinking more than fine friends! Loved the menu, the entire story, but, tell me, how is the sister, who picked her up? Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 3:40 AM
Victor, a wonderful romantic poem. Best of luck in the contest. -hugs
George Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 10:48 PM
A shipboard romance thus turns into a lifetime affair ! Sad, in your excitement you forgot all about your sister :) Well done dear Victor. All the Best.
Rolland Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 2:25 PM
so romantic images , i love the silent kiss who persists in memories blessing
Edmonds  Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 7:06 AM
Very romantic Victor, memories of the bliss of a silent kiss… Beryl
DiMino Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:07 AM
Delightful Victor; you are truly a romantic like the movies -- Gable and...I forget her name. A time when theater was entertaining, and wonderfully heartfelt. Great write!
Gentile Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 4:29 AM
Victor, I just love your romantic lines! Such a great title and subject and perfect for a lovely story to soothe the soul! Could read it over and over again! Happy Monday!
Rose  Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 1:57 AM
Oh My Mr Romantic here loosed all the strings of her heart, thats a way to go , love it ! a fav for me
Bayles Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 7:29 PM
Surprising.
Hind Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Hmmmm, interesting, lol. A cute story
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:03 PM
what a fabulous romantic poem - love the twist in the story! hugs Jan xx
Fleming Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 1:37 PM
A fine tale of unexpected romance, Victor. Love that superb description of the dinner...I was actually tasting it myself. Enjoyed! :) john
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 11:40 AM
This is so cute and ooh la la romantic!
May Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 9:47 AM
This is a beautiful story, so nicely told. Best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Lovely story, my friend. Good luck in the contest
Winter Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:59 AM
Happy to see you writing humorous poems!
Winter Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:48 AM
It's way too friendly of her to just go on a date with a stranger just like that. Brilliant writing! Had me grinning :)
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:20 AM
Excellent poem Victor. I enjoyed this. Well written. Good luck on the contest :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 4:14 AM
Another fine romantic tale you have spun or was it. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Poet Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:56 AM
Your tale, woven with threads of misperception and the tender ties of affection, is beautifully conveyed Victor. Best of a win
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:32 AM
- ... and one thing led to another ... lovely poem, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great Sunday .... maybe dinner at an Italian restaurant :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 10:07 PM
From mistaken identity, to romantic attraction, your tale is beautifully told, Victor. :)
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