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The Silent Edge

In silence lies a hidden blade, A subtle force, in shadows laid. While others shout, their voices loud, The quiet stands unbowed. Rejection’s sting, a bitter art, Yet fuels the fire within the heart. Each “no” a step on paths unknown, A test of will, a strength full-grown. Watchful eyes with steady gaze, Unspoken truths through crowded haze. While noise consumes the restless sea, The silent see what others flee. Not always near, not everywhere, Selective steps make moments rare. Like treasures found in hidden folds, Their presence gleams in whispered holds. With quiet strength they claim the floor, No need to shout, no need for more. Their confidence, a steady stream, A force unseen, a lasting dream. And pain, though sharp, becomes their guide, Through shadowed nights and tears uncried. Each scar a mark, each wound a key, To rise beyond, to simply be. Unpredictable as rain’s soft flow, A shifting tide that none can know. Each move a question, each word a spark, A glowing flame within the dark. The world may favor voices loud, But silence holds a strength unbowed. A power hidden, yet reclaimed, A force unnamed, but deeply claimed.

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Date: 6/22/2025 12:10:00 PM
Hello Kield VK. Hi! What is your second language? A beautiful deep poem you created. I enjoyed to read. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 6/23/2025 9:33:00 AM
Hello Kield VK. Thank you for telling me. My girlfriend married a Dutch man. they were married for many years. Now she is a widow. It is a beautiful language. i heard her husband speak in Dutch. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 6/22/2025 12:21:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for your kind words and encouragement! I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem's depth. To answer your question, my first language is Dutch, and my second is English. Blessings to you as well! Kjeld
Date: 6/8/2025 5:40:00 PM
The silent seem to say more with fewer words. I enjoy your poem . It holds so many truths.
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Date: 6/15/2025 3:23:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda, for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and found truth in its portrayal of silence's power. Your appreciation for the idea that the silent say more with fewer words truly resonates with the poem’s essence.
Date: 6/1/2025 9:59:00 PM
Hey u, how r yah? Well The Silence Edge I see it's Rhyming something that i'm learning. I recently tried with the poem "My Love" It's hard esp when English is ur 2nd language. I invite u to my poetrysoup hp and maybe comment on some if u want. But how wud I know u visited right? It's good for your soul.~Jac
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Date: 6/1/2025 10:08:00 PM
Hi Jacqueline, thank you for your kind comment on "The Silent Edge"! I’m happy you enjoyed the rhyming. English is my second language too, so I know how challenging it can be to write poetry. I’ll definitely take a look at your poems. Keep it up! Kjeld vk

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