The Silence of Winter

Invisible hands will thaw the frozen year
If only sun could do the same 
For the silent pair who sit in stilted air...
The two, who ride the transit bus, 
Going here and there....

     Sadly,... who knows where?.....And sadder still, is do they care?
     With a winter's chill between them, stripped and bare

She wears a cloak of tweed to keep her warm
He braves the cold hunched in a coat of brown
I see them there and wonder how it came to this
How silence breeds, while they have passed through years..

They board as two, a married couple, yes
But winter chills their very depth
Their eyes are vacant, nothing left
Of spring, of love, togetherness

When distance looms across the room
Where love once bloomed, but now is gone
Observed among a crowded bus
Or in the small café
No words are left to say?
No hands to grasp, no questions asked
No tender glance, don’t touch… don’t touch

  I wonder how it came to be?

These two who vowed to always love
Do seasons come and leave such dust
When winter’s wind turns love to rust?
And winter’s breath chill hearts to stone

They live as one, yet stare alone
It isn’t hate, it isn’t love, it isn’t care, it isn’t much….

  Just the icy, slippery grip of time .....and a deadly winter's touch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/4/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Carrie and good luck!
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:15:00 AM
Carrie, Good Luck! Congratulations on your worthy poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:15:00 AM
Superb writing, dear Carrie. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 7/1/2011 9:29:00 AM
congratulatins on your featured poem this week, just lovey~~
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations, this is a fab poem!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:35:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Carrie
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on this sad write being featured. It is an all too true look at many lives, written so well. Vince
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:53:00 AM
Congrats on the selection, Carrie. After last winter, this is so true - depression sets in. Love, daver
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 9:41:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your featured poem this week on PS.. an amazingly beautiful piece to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:18:00 AM
Superbly descriptive writing, Carrie. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:56:00 PM
Wow, such profoundness here, also maybe a message for all, as one battles age and each winter that goes with it. wonderful read this poem is, congrats on a deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:59:00 PM
many congrats for this win dear friend.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Chris, Carrie
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:36:00 PM
Oh Carrie, this is one of my favorites..what a sensitive and wonderful write. Just what I always expect from you. BG
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:12:00 PM
yike a barn burning wrap up with rhyme for emphasis!!! I hope this is not you? Great write as always. Light & Love [a fan]
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:05:00 PM
This is another different take on the challenge, Carrie-- such a sad but very fitting metaphor you used here--you never cease to amaze me with your talent and this is another wonderful example-- Super Congrats to you! hugs--nikko :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:05:00 PM
Dear Carrie, once again, I enjoyed this and read it twice! Congratulations on a well deserved win! Enjoy it! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:01:00 PM
Carrie, love your attention on love, "Congratulations on your honored fourth place win." Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:20:00 AM
Very well written, Carrie. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:22:00 AM
shimmering, carrie.. your fine wordplay deserves such FINE WIN in the contest.. APPLAUSE! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:48:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on another amazing win in the Winter Free Verse contest with this excellent entry ...enjoy with luv.. super ...
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