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The Silence of Her Eyes

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I fell in love with the silence of her eyes- those unspoken pleasures no one else has ever seen, like the intoxicating placidity of fine red wine or the noiseless footsteps of lingering thoughts that can't be stilled. Words could make no sense of it.. the silence explained everything. POTD 07/05/2017

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Uwe Stroh

Date: 12/30/2017 1:44:00 PM

I like this one very much. Good use of metaphorical expression.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/30/2017 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Uwe.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/1/2017 10:15:00 PM

A beautiful poem written with amazing poetic expression and imagery. Every line is one pleasure after another! So glad you rec'd POTD honors for this write Charlie! :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/29/2017 6:15:00 PM

Hello Charlie, I just finished reading your poem. It is very poetic, i like the way the words flow together. Perhaps She had nothing to say. have a nice evening my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 11:34:00 PM

Thank you Darlene...

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/20/2017 4:50:00 PM

The poetic beauty of your words speak to an open, loving heart that views silence as our sixth sense, as vital as the others, where one's essence truly lives when quiet is respected. The title is amazing, your words I adore Charlie. a fave

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 10:54:00 AM

So very kind of you Lynn, thank you...

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/15/2017 6:07:00 PM

Direct and pointed, with some insight.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/15/2017 10:18:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Ronald...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2017 5:22:00 PM

I don't think I ever saw this one yet. It's simply amazing, Charlie. a FAVE

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/26/2017 6:56:00 PM

So glad you liked it Andrea, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2017 7:27:00 PM

the silence of her eyes what a wonderful phrase - love the title and the poem and send my belated congrats on your POTD:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/22/2017 11:17:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 7/22/2017 9:08:00 AM

A very beautiful and captivating write "Charlie" - Absolutely alluring x x x

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/22/2017 7:20:00 PM

Thank you Indiana.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/18/2017 4:06:00 PM

Enjoying the silence Charlie.' And the thought shadows here projected.'

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/18/2017 10:49:00 PM

Thank you Joe...

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/12/2017 5:34:00 PM

How much those eyes reveal without sound! So very lovely, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/12/2017 7:38:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/12/2017 4:49:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Charlie! The last two lines are classic ... words could make no sense of it ... the silence explained everything. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/12/2017 7:35:00 PM

My best to you Freddie, thank you...