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The Silence Broken

Quickly the sky darkened All was quiet not a sound Suddenly a clasp of thunder Followed by lightening As quickly it began was quiet Bringing the peace and quiet

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Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 4/1/2024 10:21:00 PM

Hello Darlene,a lovely poem.Well done. Blessing Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2024 10:58:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/8/2021 5:47:00 AM

Hi Darlene, very beautiful and serene piece. It is really peaceful when a storm subsides. Great observation. Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/8/2021 7:30:00 AM

Hello Mala, Yes it is very peaceful when a storm subsides. Love & friendship, Darlene.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/5/2021 10:58:00 AM

They can really make a lot of noise and rumble across the sky. Well described Darlene. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hello Phyllis, Yes they can make a lot of noise. So loudly it can awake a person from a deep sleep. Thank you Phyllis. Enjoy your day my friend.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/2/2021 6:50:00 AM

The silence and peace after a thunder.. I have felt in the beginning of monsoon in our place Darlene.. It was a pleasure reading your poem... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2021 3:08:00 PM

Hello Anitha, Oh I do hope you are very careful when the monsoon comes. i hope you are in a saf place when that happens. Hugs my dear friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/30/2021 7:41:00 PM

I agree with Gershon. That is exactly what happens. Personally I love a good hard rain. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/1/2021 5:44:00 AM

Hello Judy, oh so do I especially when i am sleeping. I like to listen to the rushing down pour.Blessings my friend.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/30/2021 5:02:00 PM

Something Almighty about thunder and lightning. Never has been said more succinctly perfect. Brava!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/1/2021 5:42:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, your right, they are not perfect. Thank yu for your lovely comment. Enjoy your day my fiend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/29/2021 4:40:00 PM

That's exactly how it happens. Snap, crackle, Pop! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2021 7:43:00 AM

Hello Gershon, Yes that is exactly how it happens. Enjoy your day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/29/2021 6:32:00 AM

Excellent verse.well done. Darlene, no thunder where I live. Lightning is rare as is snow. I lived through years of it in Chicago. The thunder scared me. and all my cats. I really love the peace here. HUGS.. xx. PANGIE

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2021 8:53:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, Thank you Panagiota, Sometimes the thunder scares me to. Peace is good. Hugs Darlene. Hugs Darlene xx

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 4/28/2021 5:02:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. I do love lightning, but when it's with thundering. Lol... There is peace in it

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2021 7:49:00 AM

Hello Paghunda, I like the thunder the of it is soothing to me when sleeping. I am not a fan of the lightening. Yes there is peace in the thunder. Enjoy your day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/28/2021 11:43:00 AM

I love a good storm! Peace and quiet as well

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2021 3:59:00 PM

Hello Kim, I love the storm as long as I am not out in it. I like to listen to the thunder roar and listen to the rain falling. Hugs Darlene

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/28/2021 11:05:00 AM

Love that when the storm subsides and its peaceful once more. Hope your week is going well Darlene. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2021 4:01:00 PM

Hello Tom, I do as well Tom. yes my week is going peaceful thank you. I hope your week is the same. Enjoy your evening my friend.