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The Shooting Star

Spishu,spishu the shooting star
Noisily flies across night bar
Lights life for split second
Then wonder if beckon
Which one is being called afar

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Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 5/10/2010 10:21:00 PM

UR POEMS R SO SERIUS.YOU HAVE A HARD TIME BEIN FUNNY DONT U? DNT BE SAD, THATS UR PROBLEM bUfFy

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/24/2010 9:55:00 PM

Hey Sara, congratulations on your win in the contest...I'm asking Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. ....Jimmy

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/23/2010 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations Sara, on your honorable mention in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann

John Freeman

Date: 3/21/2010 12:23:00 PM

Awesome Limerick Sara. Congratulations on your success in this Competition. Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/20/2010 2:14:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your well-deserved honorable mention to this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/19/2010 7:52:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your HM in the Limerick contest.. a fun write and win for u to so enjoy .. happy to be sharing the spotlight with u also..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/19/2010 5:37:00 PM

Congratulations Sara. Great write and great win. Love, Joyce

James Fraser

Date: 3/19/2010 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/19/2010 12:11:00 PM

congrats on your sucess in the contest!! funny and I enjoyed reading it!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2010 10:58:00 AM

Enjoyed your limerick, Sara! Congrats on your success in the contest. There were many great limericks and judging was difficult! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 3/14/2010 8:17:00 AM

Kool Limerick Sara >> James

Billy Thekidster

Date: 3/14/2010 4:07:00 AM

Great Limerick Ms Sara Kendrick. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/13/2010 9:30:00 AM

A very nice Limerick, Sara! Uplifting with the stars! And thank you for your comments...Have a nice Sunday!... Gert

Marty Owens

Date: 3/12/2010 9:30:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your very good Limerick tonight...good luck in the contest...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2010 10:13:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fine poetry today Sara. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration and do share more of your poetry with us. Wishing you the best in the contest my friend. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 3/11/2010 11:57:00 PM

Best wishes in the contest Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2010 6:25:00 PM

A very neat Limerick.. if for the contest.. good luck... luv the alliteration also.. something special to bring the poem to life... and I so luv stars of all kinds.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Lokken

Date: 3/11/2010 3:59:00 PM

Awww- I love stars. Beautifully done... Regards, Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/11/2010 12:52:00 PM

good mom!!