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The Shooting Star

Spishu,spishu the shooting star Noisily flies across night bar Lights life for split second Then wonder if beckon Which one is being called afar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 5/10/2010 10:21:00 PM
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:55:00 PM
Hey Sara, congratulations on your win in the contest...I'm asking Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. ....Jimmy
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Date: 3/23/2010 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your honorable mention in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:23:00 PM
Awesome Limerick Sara. Congratulations on your success in this Competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/20/2010 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your well-deserved honorable mention to this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:52:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Limerick contest.. a fun write and win for u to so enjoy .. happy to be sharing the spotlight with u also..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations Sara. Great write and great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:11:00 PM
congrats on your sucess in the contest!! funny and I enjoyed reading it!!
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:58:00 AM
Enjoyed your limerick, Sara! Congrats on your success in the contest. There were many great limericks and judging was difficult! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:17:00 AM
Kool Limerick Sara >> James
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:07:00 AM
Great Limerick Ms Sara Kendrick. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 3/13/2010 9:30:00 AM
A very nice Limerick, Sara! Uplifting with the stars! And thank you for your comments...Have a nice Sunday!... Gert
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very good Limerick tonight...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fine poetry today Sara. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration and do share more of your poetry with us. Wishing you the best in the contest my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2010 11:57:00 PM
Best wishes in the contest Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:25:00 PM
A very neat Limerick.. if for the contest.. good luck... luv the alliteration also.. something special to bring the poem to life... and I so luv stars of all kinds.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/11/2010 3:59:00 PM
Awww- I love stars. Beautifully done... Regards, Sara
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:52:00 PM
good mom!!
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