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I can taste the smell of water as I near the ocean coast remembering the feel of it against my skin and the warm summer days in early morn but most of all I love to touch the shape of water and as far as I can see to hear its waves in motion temperamental ranges anywhere from vicious to peaceful fickle swaying moods at times violent at times playful AP: 1st place 2021 Submitted on June 13, 2021 for contest THE SHAPE OF WATER sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH

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Date: 6/21/2021 6:31:00 AM
Very nice poem. That is the way I feel about rain.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thank you, Richard ~
Date: 6/14/2021 7:00:00 AM
Love this, Line. Wishing you a win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, Gina. I enjoyed writing this ~
Date: 6/13/2021 10:02:00 PM
Bingo! You have really put your personal stamp --- your finger, if you will --- on the H2O show! Enchanting, Line! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2021 5:34:00 AM
lol ~ you're so funny ~ thank you
Date: 6/13/2021 12:38:00 PM
Hello Ms. Lin, It's a very potent write. I hope you win, enjoyed it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2021 5:34:00 AM
thank you for your vote of confidence, Nancy ~
Date: 6/13/2021 12:02:00 PM
Hello Lin, I love the sound of water. I like the sound of the waves rushing to shore. I wish i was by the water, I miss it . Hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2021 11:59:00 AM
Hello Lin, you miss it to. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2021 5:45:00 PM
I know what you mean, Darlene ~
Date: 6/13/2021 11:55:00 AM
An amazing poem for the contest, Line:-) I wish you the best of luck for a win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thank, Edward ~ much appreciated

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