The Shape of Water - Version 2

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Thanks for your lovely suggestions, Kirk ~

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I can taste the smell of water as I near the ocean coast I remember the feel of it against my skin and the warm summer days in early morn but most of all I love to touch the shape of water and as far as I can see to hear its waves in motion from vicious to peaceful its fickle swaying moods at times violent at times playful Submitted on March 1, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND VERSE FREED sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Originally posted on July 24, 2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2022 4:29:00 AM

Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2022 5:20:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. Most appreciated.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/26/2021 2:18:00 AM

The ocean is always a good subject for poetry. It enables the writer to create images we can relate to. I am lucky we live near the sea so am familiar with the ocean's fickle nature. Nice one..Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2021 3:35:00 AM

Sounds like a lovely place to live, Delice ~