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Thanks for your lovely suggestions, Kirk ~

I can taste the smell of water as I near the ocean coast I remember the feel of it against my skin and the warm summer days in early morn but most of all I love to touch the shape of water and as far as I can see to hear its waves in motion from vicious to peaceful its fickle swaying moods at times violent at times playful AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 24, 2021

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Date: 7/26/2021 2:18:00 AM
The ocean is always a good subject for poetry. It enables the writer to create images we can relate to. I am lucky we live near the sea so am familiar with the ocean's fickle nature. Nice one..Delice
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Date: 7/26/2021 3:35:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely place to live, Delice ~