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The Shape of Dreams

Does a cube control The curves of rainbows? Only in dreams where The sky is square 8/27/23

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/8/2023 1:07:00 PM

Hi Michelle, You write outside of the box I see. Enjoyed

Bill Baker

Date: 9/4/2023 4:13:00 PM

Questions without absolute answer are always engaging, Michelle. I like your poem because it makes me use my mind in a unique way. Write On1 my friend. Bill

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/3/2023 4:06:00 PM

Thought provoking littl poem, Michelle. Love your ideas! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/31/2023 7:23:00 PM

You've given poetry its own 'Rubix Cube!' Bravo, Michelle! ~ gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/31/2023 6:51:00 AM

Clever and fun piece.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/30/2023 10:15:00 AM

Dreams are limited like rainbows. and a square sky is limited. Within a square sky perhaps it would seem dreams and rainbows could stay forever. But the sky is not square; it's infinite; dreams are just dreams afterall. It is all in how it looks.... this poem had my head spinning!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/28/2023 7:10:00 AM

This writing is truly extraordinary, evoking a deep sense of power and expressed with great artistry. The depth and meaning of this cube are incredibly captivating. It resonates with me on a profound level.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/28/2023 4:22:00 AM

Really a deep thought In a few lines, amazing, Michelle! Rainbow blessings! Pantgir

Ink Empress

Date: 8/27/2023 8:43:00 PM

Oh how deep and meaningful is this cube. I love it. Can it control curves of rainbows. Love that really. And i love your title. Shape of dreams. Descriptive and soul stirring

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/27/2023 3:26:00 PM

Such imagery ! Thought provoking. I love it Michelle ! Rainbows can not ever be contained !! They are magical. I love the dream with the square sky . Hugs, Susan :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/27/2023 3:33:00 PM

Yes there is something untamed about rainbows, thanks for your introspective comment, Susan