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Inspired by the 2017 movie THE SHAPE OF WATER

I waited my whole life to find my man I thought it would never be however It happened one day like any other Freaks of nature without a master plan You had an aura calling out my name That moment my soul knew I was complete I had silent scars we'll call bittersweet Society had cast us out in shame I recognized you by your gentle eyes A silent voice that spoke from heart to heart I held you in my arms for just a flash What cruel destiny of greed and lies Would then align to tear us both apart When you collapsed into a heap of ash AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on January 6, 2019 for contest MOVIE MAGIC sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 3/21/2019 10:23:00 AM
I loved that understated young woman who found her happiness within the arms of her merman (for lack of a better word to describe him). Their dance scene was so unexpected, but made the movie. Congratulations on your win Line! : )
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Date: 3/21/2019 10:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Connie. I'm glad you also enjoyed this movie.
Date: 1/7/2019 10:02:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest ...Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2019 11:46:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara.
Date: 1/7/2019 8:12:00 AM
Now that one is a winner...best of luck with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 1/7/2019 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/7/2019 7:15:00 AM
inspiring fantasy : )
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Date: 1/7/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit, Sand.
Date: 1/6/2019 8:06:00 PM
I need to watch more movies, if they motivate you this well, good work Line...
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Date: 1/6/2019 10:20:00 PM
Absolutely, Charlie. This was an awesome movie.
Date: 1/6/2019 6:24:00 PM
WOW!! This is DEEP!!! I felt this one. Great job!
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Date: 1/6/2019 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Ian. I watched the movie this pm and was very moved.

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