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The Shadows Know

The Shadows Know :o On this eve when creeping shadows devour the fading light, As fiery phantom secrets touch the neck just out of sight, Nightmares cackle on tiptoes to slip past dreams at midnight And silent footsteps stalk the unspoken with ghostwrites. :o Dark cauldrons of the dense spells blur the scene outright - Snake through alleys of trembling truth with no moonlight. What lays hidden beneath this unknown breath uptight? Cold sweat rises leaving reason bereft of clear eyesight. :o A cache in ghostly apparitions of remorse take delight In prickly dancing panic - taking shape in the half-light - Chaotic heartbeats pound at feared exposure’s fright Secrets stumble dodging reason’s insight. :o Shapeless terror stretches up to hover over midnight Blocking escape from this howling wild and ebony night Hairs stand up on the spine in fainting trickery’s plight - The eerie shadows know a thousand eyes see all tonight. :o 10-19-21 Contest: Halloween Monorhyme Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 11/9/2021 10:35:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/10/2021 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve. Halloween is a time to let loose with some fun for both children and little kids at heart! Blessings to you!
Date: 10/25/2021 4:20:00 PM
This gives me the shivers, especially the line 'nightmares cackle on tiptoes' - if I have scary dreams I'm blaming you ;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/26/2021 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, I think, Michelle. To be honest, I have always loved the unexplainable and the eerie on Halloween. Sorry about the nightmares! Sending you the sweetest of dreams - no monster inc,!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/25/2021 10:29:00 PM
Date: 10/21/2021 10:00:00 AM
Great imagery and spooky write, Sam. A winner to me :) Good luck in Caren's contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/21/2021 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve! I just tried to get into that place of eerie and spooky and how it felt. I do love All Hallows Eve when it is spooky and not gory - laughing at death knowing it has no victory! I always associate Halloween with the scripture "Death, where is your sting?" Blessings of the season to you!
Date: 10/20/2021 1:10:00 AM
Wow! I admire how versatile you are. This is really quite spooky! I can't write scary poems and wish I was so capable as you are!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/21/2021 11:30:00 AM
Karen, thank you so much! You do me a great honor! I have to credit Poetry Soup for teaching me so many forms. I was basically writing free verse with a little rhyme. The past year and a half has been like an intensive poetry workshop offering opportunities to dabble in new forms which I have stumbled through many times. The feedback from other soupers has been so motivating and inspiring encouraging me to keep writing even when it involves something new! I hope you have the same experience. Please feel free to soup mail me any time. All the best. I really like what I see in your writes!

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