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The Sculptor POTD

The wood was perfect. Hammer in hand, he toiled. Sweat trickled down his neck. Her face was chiselled, A perfect portrait: The hawk-like nose, The high cheekbones, The wide brow. But not her flaring eyes. They defied him. In exasperation, he threw the lamp, His only source of light, And watched the wood burn. In the deserted cabin. In a wooded glen forlorn, When the fire subsided They found his body Long dead, carbonised and cold. And a piece of chiselled wood Charred and worthless. originally written in 10/4/2016

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Date: 10/9/2024 10:26:00 AM
- A tragic story - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor - hugs
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Date: 10/8/2024 8:05:00 PM
Such a sad descriptive poem. Wood work such a very intricate but hard work. Sorry I miss your poem of the day. Well deserved win. hugs
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Date: 10/8/2024 12:09:00 AM
A sad write my friend, what a shame that at the end ' 'They found his body long dead, carbonized and cold, and a piece of chiselled wood, charred and worthless.' when he spent hours sculpting such a beautiful piece. So well penned. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 10/7/2024 7:55:00 PM
I'm back with delighted congratulations on POTD, Victor. This beautiful poem, is so deserving. :)
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:01:00 PM
Victor back to Congratulate you for receiving such a high honor, of POTD. Take care my friend...
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Date: 10/7/2024 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem is done masterfully, with expressive and unique touch! Brilliant, but sad - a fascinating picture of grief!
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Date: 10/7/2024 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD Victor. Well done :)
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Date: 10/7/2024 12:54:00 PM
The portrait was perfect, yet, it had one flaw. Strange, it being both at the same time. It sounds like this drove him crazy. To the point of death. Many emotions curl around your thoughts. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/7/2024 12:02:00 PM
Terrific write, Victor, Congratulations from Pangie
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Date: 10/7/2024 10:26:00 AM
So sad, Victor, but an extremely well written story of grief and grieving. Congratulations on your POTD. Blessings.
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Date: 10/7/2024 10:11:00 AM
Quite a story! Congrats on POTD, dear Victor!
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Date: 10/7/2024 9:17:00 AM
A sad ending to this verse, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 10/7/2024 8:16:00 AM
A story in which you told nothing but you showhed, through your so meticulous and expressive words, a lot about the sequence of events then you have surprised your avid reader who was thinking could predict the end of the story.. I can see the whole scene..the whole setting and then be moved when I found out about the lot of the sculptor! What a mastery of storytelling! A well deserved recognition and acknowledgement! Congratulations on your POTD honour dear Victor! So happy to read you. Regards
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Date: 10/7/2024 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "The Sculptor" is a wonderful write/story. Enjoy your wonderful day with your win..................
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Date: 10/7/2024 7:53:00 AM
Oof! I was just getting into it then the sad twist. Nevertheless, an unexpected twist is often what makes a story great. Enjoy your special day Victor
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Date: 10/7/2024 7:03:00 AM
Yep only God can make that life-like flare in the eyes the sculptor sought. And man to destroy the life that once was the wood. Congratulations, Victor, a well deserved POTD!
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:49:00 AM
Big Congratulations Victor on POTD....Cuddles Galore!! Debx
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:42:00 AM
Congrats on POTD with this sad masterpiece. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:23:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD. Fascinating albeit sad. Also, thanks for your visit to me page. Blessings
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:03:00 AM
Victor congratulations on Your POTD. captivating, very sad. As is reality, sometimes. Keep Rolling.
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Date: 10/7/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for your POTD.
Date: 10/7/2024 6:00:00 AM
Your pen on fire too, fantastic piece! Congratulations on POTD darling. Have a wonderful day dear vb! xomo <3
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Date: 10/7/2024 4:56:00 AM
Victor, a sad and captivating story, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/7/2024 4:52:00 AM
Dear Victor, First and Foremost, Congratulations on an outstanding POTD. I like how you wrote this tragic outcome, which is a great cautionary tale about the dangers of obsession and the potential cost of striving for unattainable perfection in one's craft. CONGRATS! - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/7/2024 4:50:00 AM
Well, Victor, you've done it again, left me sitting here in awe pondering the depth and passion of this poem. A scathing metaphoric love story...andno happy ending
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Date: 10/7/2024 4:47:00 AM
Wow! Sadness profound...congratulations on POTD
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