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The Scent of Water

The scent of water steamed off your skin -I felt boyish, vulnerable; you peeked through a wisp of hair and beckoned, then all of the stars shot and scrambled. You blurred in their midst - smiling. I was your madras clad marionette all wrapped in tangled strings. How could I forget! Here on the same shore, the salty scent -memories of years that have flown but not gone; emotions so wisely spent on a promise to carry on. As your ashes fly to the briny air remember the promise you made when you left me here...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/24/2017 7:40:00 PM
You drew me in, even though I am usually more of a free verse kind of girl. This too, I love !
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Date: 7/8/2017 3:01:00 PM
Wow this is powerful. What an ending! :)
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Date: 7/8/2017 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful in form and content, with a touch of sadness. I love this one Craig:)
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