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The Sanctuary

The sun shines bright In this sanctuary of mine Of love and peace Forever mingling there Unique in their sameness

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/24/2010 6:03:00 PM

wonderful thoughts on your sanctuary, Tahera! wish you the best in the contest! -- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/23/2010 8:08:00 AM

Any place where love and peace prevail would make a great sanctuary, Tahera. I like the way you spoke of the feelings associated with "sanctuary," as opposed to just describing a place. Best wishes in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/23/2010 7:23:00 AM

Tahera, great entry for the contest.. Your last line is brilliant.. Good luck to you ;) Wilma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/23/2010 6:25:00 AM

oh I like you take on the sanctuary poem...great work!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2010 4:35:00 AM

A nice thoughts creating a safe and blissful sanctuary, Tahera

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/22/2010 11:14:00 PM

pretty poetry you have penned, good luck in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2010 9:49:00 PM

This is so nice, Tahera. And how interesting your job of chocolate candy. I LOVE that. I would get so fat doing it! Luv, Andrea