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The Same Ol'

Hi mommy. I'm glad you're clean Or at least that's what it seems Daddy called me You send him and email It had a picture In that picture is what killed him Fear bled through his every limb Jazzys picture in the back His soul went black How could you do this I thought it was all bliss Why mommy? You let it control again I'm in shame People in and out They make me want to shout My scars are from you I am..Who? It doesn't matter I'm just her Mommy i want daddy And he should have let you take the blame Cause i knew it was going to be the same

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/28/2014 8:01:00 AM

A very piognant and sad poem. Great Write. WELCOME TO tHE sOUP.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 5:29:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/8/2014 11:44:00 AM

Welcome, Starr. Enjoyed this first poem of yours. Hope you will find many friends on this site to encourage you in your writing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2014 10:53:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Starr :) - I choose your first moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Schojan

Date: 5/7/2014 7:51:00 AM

Very good, I love the way you capture emotion in this poem, great writing :) Welcome to poetry soup

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2014 2:26:00 PM

very expressive, and sad.. Starr, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2014 11:02:00 AM

Hi Starr, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@