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The Saddened

For thou are more broken For even the ones who don't try For every word left unspoken Every word, to which was a lie Leave these people awake to cry Alas, there is still hope Don't lay awake and mope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/4/2009 6:52:00 AM
Nicely done and good advice which is hard to follow. Keep writing. Sara
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