The Saddened

For thou are more broken
For even the ones who don't try
For every word left unspoken
Every word, to which was a lie
Leave these people awake to cry
Alas, there is still hope
Don't lay awake and mope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Nicely done and good advice which is hard to follow. Keep writing. Sara
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