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The Sad Little Pumpkin

Little pumpkin very sad for in white he'd been clad To be a lantern was his dream but woeful he was white as cream So I said, to his delight, that I liked his coat of white Now, because I liked him most, my Jack O' Lantern is a ghost Inspired by Raul Morenos' White Pumpkin contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/4/2009 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win--I really enjoyed this poem :) a different take on the white pumpkin
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Date: 10/31/2009 1:37:00 PM
The royal carriage-pie awaits @ midnight !!! Well done QR .....
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on being second in Raul's contest. Great poem. Pam.
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Date: 10/30/2009 8:36:00 PM
Charming and entertaining.. congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/30/2009 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations on the contest...very nice...Marty
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Date: 10/30/2009 6:45:00 PM
very cool poem! Robin! congrats!
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Date: 10/30/2009 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Robin. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2009 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your GREAT poem placing in Raul's contest Robin! I love it! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/30/2009 3:08:00 PM
wowser Gal what a great job! Big winner gal! Light & Love
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Date: 10/30/2009 2:25:00 PM
Great job Robin. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 10/30/2009 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Robin, on your 2nd place win in Raul's White Pumpkin contest... a nifty piece of poetry .. unique and different.. well done... keep on with it... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/30/2009 1:53:00 PM
this is very cute lovely last line congrats!
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Date: 10/30/2009 12:51:00 PM
Hooray for you Robin...this sweet poem in the winner's circle!!! Great job! Congratulations!, Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/30/2009 12:50:00 PM
AWESOME POEM, ROBIN. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 10/30/2009 12:22:00 PM
Robin, congratulations in placing 2nd in my contest. I enjoyed your poem...Raul
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Date: 10/30/2009 7:09:00 AM
VERY Super, Robin! Love, Dane
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Date: 10/28/2009 12:32:00 PM
Robin, you're sure to earn high marks for this sweet tale! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:27:00 PM
What a fun poem! Good luck in the contest Robin :-)
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Date: 10/23/2009 11:31:00 AM
PS--Good luck in the contest!! Karen
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Date: 10/23/2009 11:30:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme and personification for fun poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:58:00 PM
cute, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/21/2009 2:52:00 PM
now thats holloween spirit! jhl
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Date: 10/20/2009 2:32:00 AM
Robin, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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Date: 10/20/2009 12:24:00 AM
Good one!, Robin. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 4:42:00 PM
LOL good one hon. Light & Love
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