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The Rusted Gate

Twilight in the silky cobwebs filling the rusted gate _________________________________________ 9/11/2016

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Date: 11/14/2016 7:58:00 PM
A beautiful image, Probi. God bless the spiders' work of art.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/14/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/12/2016 7:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Probir this was one of my favourites!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/12/2016 12:20:00 PM
I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/12/2016 7:15:00 PM
Wow, seeing you after a long time ... Am very glad ... Thank you for visiting and liking ... Stay well ...
Date: 11/12/2016 10:23:00 AM
Nice!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 11/12/2016 7:17:00 PM
Your liking is nice too ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/12/2016 8:07:00 AM
Nicely done and congratulations on your honors...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/12/2016 7:18:00 PM
Ah, my Twilight feels glad that you like it ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/11/2016 7:46:00 PM
Hi Probir, I love when I see art with poetry, in this case, your words painted the picture in my mind! Also Congrats! :)
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Date: 11/12/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much ... blessed is my Twilight ...
Date: 11/11/2016 6:35:00 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/11/2016 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis ...
Date: 11/11/2016 4:23:00 PM
Strong imagery, Probir...I pictured your scene very well. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much ... congratulations on your grand success as well on this theme ... The abandoned cemetery is a wonderful read ...
Date: 11/11/2016 8:47:00 AM
A simple yet captivating image...metaphorically beautiful, Probir. A one-liner after my heart! Congratulations on your fine win. // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for liking my poem ... Congratulations on your podium win in this contest ... the heaven's gate is wonderful ... regards ... probir ...
Date: 11/11/2016 6:59:00 AM
Those spiders are in heaven when they find a gate like your's Probir. Congratulations.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 10:33:00 AM
Beautiful comment ... highly enjoyable one liner for me! ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/10/2016 8:55:00 PM
Congrats!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/11/2016 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, and congrats on your being at the top, in this contest ...
Date: 11/10/2016 8:00:00 AM
I can see it as if I were there, and in one line...wow!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/10/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/10/2016 5:48:00 AM
So majestically expressed my friend, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/10/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/9/2016 2:25:00 PM
Ah!!! Very descriptive ..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 9:19:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/9/2016 2:16:00 PM
beautiful metaphors, probir... this is better than mine!..huggs
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Date: 11/9/2016 9:20:00 PM
Thank you for enjoying the metaphor ...
Date: 11/9/2016 1:40:00 PM
Twilit beauty, love the simple imagery Probir.
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Date: 11/9/2016 9:22:00 PM
My words are mostly simple ... thanks for liking, Paloma ...
Date: 11/9/2016 10:14:00 AM
I can see the dew diamonds forming...Very nice visual here Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 9:22:00 PM
Thank you for liking ...
Date: 11/9/2016 10:01:00 AM
very beautiful imagery Probir:-) hugs Jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2016 9:23:00 PM
Thank you, Jan ....

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