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The Ruins of a Beautiful Evening

While I sip tea sitting in my cabana, enjoying the nature I watch two deer playing joyfully as the sun shares My lovely neighbors are barbequing Venison is on the menu...I have tears Writing Challenge 5, March 2019, Four Lines-Poetry Contest Sponsor Dear Heart 3-24-2019

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/15/2019 11:50:00 PM

Heartfelt, Charlie. I grew up in a family of hunters. But I have fed them over the years, hating the thought of these beautiful animals being on the menu. Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2019 5:51:00 PM

Charlie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned piece, I have felt exactly the same way many times ~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/28/2019 12:56:00 AM

So sad that these beautiful animals are killed and butchered for the enjoyment mostly of tourism, and then boast on their menus that venison is part of the meal.They are so nimble and dainty as they move so, I can imagine your tear when you realized and imagine their fate! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/28/2019 12:58:00 AM

I got so caught up in this poem Charles that I forgot to congratulate you on your win. Hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2019 2:24:00 PM

- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/24/2019 12:02:00 PM

Hi Charles, such a wonderful write my friend. I can picture the beautiful scene so easily and I share the feelings towards the Venison. The scene at the beginning does give peace to the heart. Love the content of the joy and the tears. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike. XX

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/24/2019 11:37:00 AM

Ah, what a sweet, poetic voice I hear screaming your outrage!