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The Rugged Trail

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The trail ahead of me is a silk scarf over green hills; it undulates with the earth, leading into the horizon of land meeting sky. It could have been woven for thousands of years, perhaps in a place where time is truly forever, a place of eternal serenity. Each of my footfalls is cushioned from below and the next encouraged, for this is a path given to the walker, to the one who relishes the chance to follow the rising sun. the rugged trail said ‘follow me deeper, deeper to your yearning soul.’

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Deb M

Date: 2/3/2024 7:55:00 AM

Very touching and lovely poem Sara! Debx

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/1/2024 6:15:00 PM

Dear Sara, I am inspired by the soft yet vibrant imagery so reverently expressed in your beautiful Haibun. Admiring and ardent prose followed by a tender Haiku. Brilliant poetry, dear soulful poetess. Your verse brings my spirit to "the rugged trail". Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 2/1/2024 12:25:00 PM

Your poem is a testament to the transformative power of nature and the endless possibilities that await those who embrace the journey. It is a reminder to cherish the beauty of the world around us, to seek solace and inspiration in the simple act of walking and witnessing the wonders of creation.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:00:00 PM

you summed up my poem nicely, Silent One. Walking, especially hiking, has allowed me personal growth and many rocky adventures :-) have a splendid evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2024 8:23:00 AM

Your eloquent use of words beautifully expresses a complex range of emotions, dear Sara. Through your writing, you effortlessly transport us on a captivating voyage. It is truly remarkable, as this is an opportunity bestowed upon those who appreciate the exhilarating prospect of pursuing new beginnings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:59:00 PM

thanks, Sotto, for journeying with me and for experiencing the many emotions. You're right...the journey is one of new beginnings. I appreciate your in-depth read of my poem. Grateful for you...your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2024 5:33:00 AM

You take us there on a journey through your pen, Sara. Simply awesome: ---for this is a path given to the walker, to the one who relishes the chance to follow the rising sun...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:57:00 PM

well said, Vijay! Thank you for your wonderful compliments and for your visits. I'm grateful for you, blessings, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2024 9:59:00 PM

This is SO GOOD. A fave

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:16:00 AM

awww, thank you & I'm grateful for the 'fave'...have a splendid day, hugs, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 8:33:00 PM

Beautiful.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:17:00 AM

thanks ever so much, Paige!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/31/2024 8:27:00 PM

A comely scene in photo and poem. A leisurely walk is good for the soul.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:17:00 AM

I agree, Hilda. A leisurely walk is good for body & soul. hugs, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/31/2024 8:08:00 PM

Oh my, what a magical poem this is! Somewhat brought me tears of healing, as it dives deep into the essence of spiritual awakening and self-discovery.. Your tender wordplay conveys a soulful tapestry of emotions, dear Sara.. The readers will definitely find something astonishing, with every read..It's like unfolding layers of mystery and feelings. "The trail ahead of me is a silk scarf over green hills" That was sufficient to keep my heart enchanted throughout & that haiku, WOW! A FAV once again

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:19:00 AM

wow, Hiya, your comments are so eloquent and greatly appreciated! Thank you for your in depth read and response. Grateful for you and for the fave--humbly grateful for your visit and the fave! Have a splendid day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/31/2024 6:48:00 PM

Always searching for what's over the horizon or at the end of the rainbow. The trail never ends for an adventurer. A lovely haibun, my friend. This realy touches my soul. A fav for me, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:20:00 AM

true words, Jerry...the trail never ends, especially for the 'spiritual' adventurer. Wise words. I'm humbly grateful for the fave. Thanks for stopping by and enjoy your day, Sara