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The Rose - Poet's Dozen

The Rose - Poet's Dozen rose awaits the call to awake with coming spring promise for rebirth The seasons of all things hold much in store, for life brings death which brings new life once more. The rose relies on wisdom of its root to make it bloom when winter sets it free. And then in Spring, begins once more its fragile ride through life; with sun and rain and wind it must contend. And day by day its velvet petals open, spread out wide upon its leafy stem; all stages lead to fullness in the end. The tireless earth once more gives life; its promise does attend. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: A Poet's Dozen Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 11/06/2015 ================================= One modern Haiku: 3 lines: Syllables 5,7,5 A couplet: 2 lines Free verse: 2 lines English Quintain: 5 lines: Rhyming scheme ababb

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Date: 11/7/2015 8:41:00 PM
This poem flows so smoothly! Well done, Sandra! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/9/2015 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your support. Hugs, Sanddra
Date: 11/7/2015 3:10:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/7/2015 8:55:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your win :) "The rose relies on wisdom of its root to make it bloom when winter sets it free." it's very nice, you should add that your quotes :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Ed. I appreciate your visit, encouraging words, and congrats. Perhaps I will add as a quote! Sandra
Date: 11/6/2015 10:56:00 PM
Great write and great win, Sandra, congratulations a 7+ :~)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/6/2015 7:40:00 PM
Congrats my friend on a fine win. I knew this one would place very high.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your visits and support. Sandra
Date: 11/6/2015 7:19:00 PM
Lovely Sandra! Congrats on your rosy win! Love, Balveen
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thankyou, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/5/2015 11:20:00 AM
Oh this was very nicely done. Every form grows together into a blossoming rose.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/5/2015 8:09:00 PM
Hi Casarah, thank you so much for your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/3/2015 7:12:00 PM
This is one of the best I have seen for the contest. Also it would double for the favorite flower contest. I used an oldie and it was ROSE!!! I love this flower.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/5/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I really appreciate your encouraging comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/3/2015 3:41:00 PM
a floating melody of nature at her best blossoming, sandra... ohh so fine!...huggs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/5/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/3/2015 9:25:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL ... so very beautiful...7, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/5/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thank you, Lin, for your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sandra

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