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The Rose

Simmering on a low constant flame, Lacking visible steam and smoke, The red blood became more deep in color, Is the rose of my heart! Adding onto day after day , The fragrance became more intense, sans to lose essence and sheen, Is the rose of my heart! Perpetual Longings to stay close to you, The gap became lengthened so far, Ineffectual to lose charm and craze, Is the rosé of my heart! Some day I will attain you absolute , Incompetent to predict those golden moments , The time surely will favour it bloom, The Rose of my heart!

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James Fraser

Date: 1/15/2015 1:37:00 PM

Like Robert below me, I love Roses. Love this write from your heart, James :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/15/2014 11:46:00 AM

I love roses and really love your poem! So beautiful and ended with this gem too! "Some day I will attain you absolute , Incompetent to predict those golden moments , The time surely will favour it bloom, The Rose of my heart!" Bravo!

Sam Raj

Date: 5/2/2014 12:30:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, Deep red written all over. The fragrance could be smelt, the sincerity and devotion too. And the longing to be crushed. Great write. Congratulations on the win. Keep in touch

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2014 12:53:00 PM

Lovely...enjoyed this read about the rose of your heart...deep red, deep love. May it bloom to the full! congrats on win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/1/2014 12:57:00 PM

Thanks For wishes Paul ! Blooming wishes more than the winning ones...since it's a real one !

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/1/2014 12:46:00 PM

congratulaions on your win, it is a revealing poem from your heart

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2014 11:02:00 AM

DR UMPA... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2013 9:32:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Dr. Upma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2013 8:47:00 PM

lovely win.....luv.linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2013 3:44:00 PM

It seems like this may be an example of kyrielle form. Very nice one. Congrats in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2013 11:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)