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She sways as her petals flutter about in sync In beautiful blooms of petals in magenta pink Her legs are long and thorny, as she sits up high A delicate floweret, basking under the sunny sky She welcomes the summer breeze with its light caress and dances as her petals fully open, on display to impress A hummingbird stops by for a visit, and for a quick feed And he drinks her sweet nectar while hovering in speed The day soon ends, and the dark nightfall brings crisp air She sadly watches her petals drop as she sheds a tear The next day she warmly awakens to a delightful surprise To her new pink blooms starting to open right before her eyes

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Date: 7/20/2025 12:45:00 PM
WOW!!! What a lovely write you have here. Love It... Pretty Rose Picture... I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 7/19/2025 8:49:00 PM
Awwwwww... delicate and sweet. I love roses. I have some in my back yard. They are beautiful and you've described it so well in your lovely poem.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/20/2025 5:08:00 AM
Eileen, thank you.

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