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The Rose

When the rose said to the sky I want to grow He said to her I know my lady I definitely know When the rose said to the ground let me go The soil said to her, I've never felt so low . 6/13/2019

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Bette Bavington

Date: 6/21/2019 6:19:00 PM

This is a super poem. I have gone through it with my children a lot. Our children wish their lives away. I always told mine be happy where you are today. You grow up so fast then you'll want to be back to where you were yesterday. It just doesn't happen that way. When we have to let them go hopefully it will be with a happy heart and not a sad one.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/16/2019 3:51:00 PM

Letting go can be sad, as you so deftly describe here, just lovely!

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/13/2019 12:35:00 PM

I mean...After all...You want to go...Well done...Enjoyed it...