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The Room

4 walls and a roof make this room, Painted on these walls are Stars and a moon. One wall however is different, For it makes people feel insignificant. All the love that I want to share,  Is held from me without care. The pain - the agony - the battle - the fight, Doesn't matter when they read the "black on white." The lies, the hurt, the children involved,  Almost makes you feel this will never get solved. A necklace made that says "I love you dad," Gives me hope and stops making me feel sad. The love for my children gives me the strength to go on, No matter the obstacle, I will always be someone they can count upon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/15/2016 11:19:00 PM
Adam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2016 8:00:00 PM
Adam, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:13:00 PM
Every parent will get this. We've all faced those battles. Your vow and unconditional love will reach them, one day. Welcome to Soup! It's a great place to both share what you've written and to read the works of other poets. Keep posting. Others will really connect to your words, Cheers, Cyndi
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