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The pyramid's gallant angel retains the apex.  Khufu's hand is spread, palms facing down  Taking shape over some infant's head. As if completing an unseen stone, a lateral line. The child lifted his arm in a greeting swing. The climb is tough, Parents of Kindness. Such stones are rough, as are intriguing hearts. It twitched such as echo, a wild aching feeling. Each angel's voice lauds The glory, Highness. Serenity in the gloomy, harsh magical lane.
Written: January 11, 2022 Inspired by a Leonardo Da Vinci Art Tableau

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Date: 1/12/2022 10:13:00 AM
Great imagination Lasaad, that painting well inspired you. Tom
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Date: 1/12/2022 5:04:00 AM
You have a keen for for art my friend. Well done, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/12/2022 12:55:00 AM
A fine work of art your writing, my friend, Lasaad! God bless you!
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Date: 1/11/2022 11:53:00 PM
A wonderful and detailed interpretation of a great piece of art. As Andrea has said, I could have got no clue of its deep significance if you had not explained it in such an ingenious way. Now I see it all. Great poem Lasaad
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Date: 1/11/2022 11:45:00 PM
Great interpretation of a famous picture.
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Date: 1/11/2022 10:52:00 PM
An artful offering after Da Vinci's art-offering. I enjoyed this poem, Lasaad, as u enjoyed writing it. Shalom, Salaam, ShanthiOm, paz
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:22:00 PM
very creative writing, Lasaad. I would have no clue how to interpret that painting just by looking at it.
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