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The River Life

*For Contest The river life has something to teach us with all the ways It moves through the storms, still finds direction continuing With strength of currents overcoming hurdles in the way Striving for a destination, it move, flows and shows us Hope floats with the river water, life of serenity Heidi Sands 11/17/16

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John Lawless

Date: 11/26/2016 10:10:00 AM

Nicely done Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2016 10:24:00 AM

Thank you , John . :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/17/2016 5:53:00 PM

Your poetry is so amazing Heidi. Only you could take the theme of a river and make it something uplifting and encouraging. You write so beautifully, it always feels genuine and from the heart.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2016 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for this very kind comment Chris. Thank you for making me smile. :)

Carol B.

Date: 11/17/2016 5:03:00 PM

Life sure has a lot of undercurrents we find ourselves having to work through at times. I love the positivity in this piece :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2016 5:10:00 PM

Yes it does. Thank you Carol.