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The River Flows

The river water curled over the rocks Flowing with pillows of white foam No-one was floating in tubes where they do, This cool, overcast, gray covered day Ripples of leaves blew in the wind, Surrounding the river’s long shore And as the cold water flowed, Wind settled with peace rarely found anymore Heidi Sands 8/29/21

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Date: 8/29/2021 8:11:00 PM
Heidi, Lovely gloom is under appreciated. It was peaceful and overcast here too. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2021 2:51:00 AM
Thank you Richard! I hope all is well :)
Date: 8/29/2021 5:25:00 PM
I like the imagery in this verse Heidi...Very nicely penned
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 7:45:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 8/29/2021 3:34:00 PM
Soothing sounds on a gloomy day--courtesy of river that flows. Well done, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I hope all is well. Lots going on everywhere. Take care :)
Date: 8/29/2021 1:43:00 PM
Calming and southing verse, Heidi, very well crafted. Blessings
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2021 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad. :)

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