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The River

How deep the fount that births a river, flowing forth a path that rushes headlong down the mount where thirsty souls can drink where waters pulse through gills of fish and quench the tongues of fauns it's streams refresh the weary and resurrect the dying and spreads it's arteries to bring new life for all who want. Written on 11/16/2016

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Date: 11/28/2016 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations, your poem was beautiful and so deserving of the placement it received. Very nicely written.
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Date: 11/28/2016 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Laura. Enjoyed reading this, great opening line. Barry
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Date: 11/28/2016 1:18:00 AM
Congratulations. The cycle of live. I like this.. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 11/27/2016 6:46:00 PM
Dropping back to say congrats on your win Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thanks, Jan :)
Date: 11/27/2016 6:37:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Glad you liked it :)
Date: 11/22/2016 3:31:00 PM
a beautifully flowing poem Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/25/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
Date: 11/20/2016 10:54:00 AM
Another great poem x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/20/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy. :)

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