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The sun is getting hotter now, And snow begins to thaw. A trickle of water runs down. Soon, it finds its usual track. One may call it a stream, But soon, it swells and starts to tumble Over the rocks, carving its landscape Only to join other streams downhill. It swells into a tumbling river, Divide into parts, run to a water mill, With a force to grind the wheat. The other pours into flatlands, Where occasionally small lakes form And living nutrients abound. Survival depends on strength. Snails, water fleas and shrimps Become the food of predators. Roaches, pikes and other fish Make heyday of their food. But they are not the rulers of the river. Let man find such lakes and ponds. A large fishing rod and tasty bait An attraction for the various fish. Men make a lovely lunch with their catch.

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Date: 11/4/2024 8:51:00 AM
Such a tranquil nature poem, Victor. You took us on a serene journey. Blessings ~
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Date: 10/31/2024 10:18:00 PM
I greatly enjoyed following the river on its rounds in this interesting poem, graced with lovely scenes. :)
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Date: 10/30/2024 10:28:00 PM
Dearest Victor, your poem beautifully captures the life cycle of water as it journeys from snowmelt to a vibrant river teeming with life. The imagery of the trickling stream transforming into a powerful river, feeding ecosystems along the way, is wonderfully vivid. Each line flows naturally, like the river itself, highlighting nature's interconnections—from the smallest creatures to human influence. A fave for me ...Hugs
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Date: 10/30/2024 7:59:00 PM
Almost like the cycle of life. Nature at its best, Victor
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Date: 10/30/2024 12:03:00 PM
Dear victor where do i begin praising this? I love the way youv woven imagery and also how youv used descriptive language and alliterations in such a subtle and seamless manner, and how youv written on river of life that ebbs and flows, in such a deeply meaningful manner is very clever of you! Pleasure reading always your poems and for some reason your poem goes so well with the picture attached too. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/30/2024 1:26:00 AM
Water whether, a lake a dam or a running river, it is God's blessing, especially a tricking stream which become a rippling river, oh so beautiful to watch. Loved this poem dear friend, BLESSINGS AND HUGS Jennifer.
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Date: 10/29/2024 11:20:00 PM
A river is always a blessing. It nourishes the land and fosters plant growth. It becomes the abode of marine creatures especially fish. On river banks, men sit with rods angling fish. It is a rewarding pastime. They can always look forward to a tasty meal. Dear Victor, enjoyed the growth of a river from a trickle to a massive river with tributaries.
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Date: 10/29/2024 9:31:00 PM
Love this one Victor it put me out there in a beautiful river fishing enjoying God's free food. lovely picture you have shared. I need to escape into what you have written for real my friend. Such joy it would bring me. really enjoyed this one Victor giving me hope to what I need to be part of. Blessings and good health to you my friend...
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Date: 10/29/2024 2:43:00 PM
A fishing trip- nice :)
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Date: 10/29/2024 2:21:00 PM
Ain't the river grand, and we are the lucky ones that get to enjoy it, thanks for sharing excellent poetry today Victor !
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Date: 10/29/2024 12:10:00 PM
Hello Victor :-) Well enjoyed read of your very nice poem!
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Date: 10/29/2024 11:10:00 AM
The landscape…the food, delightful!
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Date: 10/29/2024 6:01:00 AM
all creatures are useful, good observation of the nature including man , only man can interfere with god order, i guess, thanks for the interesting share, thanks poet yann
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Date: 10/29/2024 5:49:00 AM
Love the imagery in this one Victor, nothing more peaceful than sitting on the bank watching it flow. Tom
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Date: 10/29/2024 4:50:00 AM
I like how you include creatures we seldom glorify like roaches! Very vivid imagery and beautiful picture Victor!
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Date: 10/29/2024 3:52:00 AM
And spirits feed on man. A vicious cycle. A lot more in your poem than the surface and depth of water. Well done, Victor.
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Date: 10/29/2024 2:16:00 AM
A lovely tribute to the river Victor, so essential to life on earth, above and below the water. A great read… Beryl
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Date: 10/28/2024 11:55:00 PM
Woah, the chain of life and its tributaries! You've so wonderfully explained that here, every other being succumbs to the desires/supremacy of the other ~ even man has his own nemesis... Incredibly thoughtful this write is and the way you've crafted your words is so captivating, maintaining a powerful flow. Sending light & best wishes to you always ~
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Date: 10/28/2024 10:47:00 PM
So man rules (misrules)?
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