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The River

The sun is getting hotter now,
And snow begins to thaw.
A trickle of water runs down.
Soon, it finds its usual track.

One may call it a stream, 
But soon, it swells and starts to tumble
Over the rocks, carving its landscape
Only to join other streams downhill.

It swells into a tumbling river,
Divide into parts, run to a water mill,
With a force to grind the wheat.
The other pours into flatlands,
Where occasionally small lakes form
And living nutrients abound.

Survival depends on strength.
Snails, water fleas and shrimps
Become the food of predators.
Roaches, pikes and other fish
Make heyday of their food.

But they are not the rulers of the river.
Let man find such lakes and ponds.
A large fishing rod and tasty bait
An attraction for the various fish.
Men make a lovely lunch with their catch.
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Elliott Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Such a tranquil nature poem, Victor. You took us on a serene journey. Blessings ~
Buehler Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 10:18 PM
I greatly enjoyed following the river on its rounds in this interesting poem, graced with lovely scenes. :)
Williams Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 10:28 PM
Dearest Victor, your poem beautifully captures the life cycle of water as it journeys from snowmelt to a vibrant river teeming with life. The imagery of the trickling stream transforming into a powerful river, feeding ecosystems along the way, is wonderfully vivid. Each line flows naturally, like the river itself, highlighting nature's interconnections—from the smallest creatures to human influence. A fave for me ...Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Almost like the cycle of life. Nature at its best, Victor
Empress Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Dear victor where do i begin praising this? I love the way youv woven imagery and also how youv used descriptive language and alliterations in such a subtle and seamless manner, and how youv written on river of life that ebbs and flows, in such a deeply meaningful manner is very clever of you! Pleasure reading always your poems and for some reason your poem goes so well with the picture attached too. Sending you light always
Proxenos Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 1:26 AM
Water whether, a lake a dam or a running river, it is God's blessing, especially a tricking stream which become a rippling river, oh so beautiful to watch. Loved this poem dear friend, BLESSINGS AND HUGS Jennifer.
George Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 11:20 PM
A river is always a blessing. It nourishes the land and fosters plant growth. It becomes the abode of marine creatures especially fish. On river banks, men sit with rods angling fish. It is a rewarding pastime. They can always look forward to a tasty meal. Dear Victor, enjoyed the growth of a river from a trickle to a massive river with tributaries.
Tor Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 9:31 PM
Love this one Victor it put me out there in a beautiful river fishing enjoying God's free food. lovely picture you have shared. I need to escape into what you have written for real my friend. Such joy it would bring me. really enjoyed this one Victor giving me hope to what I need to be part of. Blessings and good health to you my friend...
Hind Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 2:43 PM
A fishing trip- nice :)
Rose  Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Ain't the river grand, and we are the lucky ones that get to enjoy it, thanks for sharing excellent poetry today Victor !
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Hello Victor :-) Well enjoyed read of your very nice poem!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 11:10 AM
The landscape…the food, delightful!
Rolland Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 6:01 AM
all creatures are useful, good observation of the nature including man , only man can interfere with god order, i guess, thanks for the interesting share, thanks poet yann
Cunningham Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Love the imagery in this one Victor, nothing more peaceful than sitting on the bank watching it flow. Tom
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 4:50 AM
I like how you include creatures we seldom glorify like roaches! Very vivid imagery and beautiful picture Victor!
DiMino Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 3:52 AM
And spirits feed on man. A vicious cycle. A lot more in your poem than the surface and depth of water. Well done, Victor.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 2:16 AM
A lovely tribute to the river Victor, so essential to life on earth, above and below the water. A great read… Beryl
Sharma  Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 11:55 PM
Woah, the chain of life and its tributaries! You've so wonderfully explained that here, every other being succumbs to the desires/supremacy of the other ~ even man has his own nemesis... Incredibly thoughtful this write is and the way you've crafted your words is so captivating, maintaining a powerful flow. Sending light & best wishes to you always ~
Seeker Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 10:47 PM
So man rules (misrules)?
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