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The Rising

Sultry girl Crouching tiptoed on a chair Watching as it rises She fears and welcomes the flood Shivers in anticipation Will she meet the waters with equal force? Or will she be swept away by the depth of his desire? For Forever Malta's Contest

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Damont Combs

Date: 8/18/2016 8:30:00 AM

This is dope simple yet powerful I appreciate good poetry and yes that poem was my first one I have made quite an impact it seems

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2016 8:33:00 AM

That's great Damont. If you have a chance check out my poem "Broken People" I have a feeling you might enjoy it. Take care Rick.

Michael Ainsley

Date: 8/11/2016 10:24:00 AM

Delightful Richard !

Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/16/2016 11:23:00 AM

Love the surprise in this. Fantastic pictures ran in my head and I love the metaphor!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/21/2016 10:20:00 PM

Congrats Richard: true to my prediction. Cheers SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2016 12:56:00 AM

Hello Richard, Congrats on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2016 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Linda. ;0)

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/17/2016 8:55:00 AM

Aha! Will she meet the waters or swept away by ....his desire? What an imagination! Congrats Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2016 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Balveen.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/17/2016 3:55:00 AM

Beautiful imagery!!! Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2016 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Teddy.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/16/2016 11:10:00 PM

Wonderful write n win Richard.. big congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2016 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/16/2016 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement, Richard-- I like the buildup in this piece leading to the open ending, well done.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Sam.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/16/2016 5:13:00 PM

I now see your name on the list, Rick. Congrats to you.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Lin.

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/16/2016 5:04:00 PM

Congrats Richard. You captured the photo in this poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Rob

Lu Loo

Date: 3/16/2016 4:42:00 PM

Richard, congrats on your placement in the contest -luloo :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Laura.;0)

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/16/2016 3:28:00 PM

Congratulations, Richard on your winning write. I was checking to see where everyone's muse went on this prompt. You my man went to sex. Sex sells!! Great job. Peace my friend:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:30:00 PM

Thanks Daniel.

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/11/2016 6:29:00 PM

Beautiful poem lovely friend drawn with a nice picture my lovely friend, bl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:30:00 PM

Thanks BL.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 3/10/2016 7:57:00 AM

I remember images; and you have gone far out, capturing scenes of rich possibilities. So thoughtful and witty. A winner already.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Iris, I would love to get your perspective on my "Shattering Rose Glasses. I wrote it for a diversity event at The University of British Columbia.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/10/2016 12:46:00 AM

Nice metaphor.....passions rising. Should rate high in the contest. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:27:00 PM

Thanks Casarah! Hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2016 5:37:00 AM

Thanks SuZ