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The refocused lens

Lights flicker on the laptop Taking me to starlit nights An unassuming muted skyline Helps me recall Brooklyn Bridge at sunset This cup of tea reminds me What it's like to be held in love

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/14/2023 7:14:00 PM

Worded softly and enchanting.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 7:44:00 AM

Glad you liked it Hilda :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/14/2023 2:15:00 PM

simply beautiful; when you write like this it is captivating - i particularly like the last two lines..many thanks for my placement in your tritina contest, glad you liked the poem :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/14/2023 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte, appreciated x

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 8:16:00 AM

a soft and touching poem...sometimes we just need to refocus. Love the way you expressed that need. Have a splendid day, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/14/2023 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Sara, I appreciate you spending time with my poem and your kind words x

John Lawless

Date: 11/14/2023 4:26:00 AM

DD, that final couplet...pure poetry that will linger in my thoughts with every future cup of tea.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/14/2023 4:39:00 AM

I'm sure we should all foster more positive memory links for everyday occurrences and revisit all the best moments via simple acts. Thank you for your comment John, you know I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on my poems :)