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The Red-Bellied Woodpecker

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     It was a lovely spring day.
     The sun greeted me with a smile.
     I heard the sound of rat-a-tat-tat.
     Sounds coming from the roof.

     I gazed out the large window.
     There sat a red-bellied woodpecker.
     Dressed for destruction in his red hard hat.
     Sporting a checkered black and white overcoat.
 
     This crazed little bird,
     sat on a metal vent pipe.
     He looked at me and winked.
     He proceeds to drill.
 
     He stopped, rather dumfounded.
     He shook his head, looking confused and dazed.
     He danced to the right side.
     Like a mad man, he continued his craze.

     I watched this bird for hours.
     determined not to give up on his quest.
     Finally, the woodpecker flew off, comely retreating.
     He lands on an oak tree in final defeat. 
 
                          4/2/2022
         A Brain Strand Standard Poetry Contest
            Sponsor: Brian Strand
                     ~ 1st ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 3:22 AM
Back with congrats. Sara
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April 8, 2022 at 8:39 PM
Hi Debra, I smiled as I read each line and chuckled at him dressed for destruction in his red hard hat. I love watching birds too. This was delightful to read and is going to my favs. Cheers Anne :-)
Baker Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Congratulations on your win, Debra. A well written, descriptive poem. I enjoyed the read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 7:40 PM
Thanks Bill, Blessings~ Debra
Ball Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 3:47 PM
OH! MY Goodness. Forgot to congratulate you on you well deserved win. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Judy, Blessings ~ Debra
Ball Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 3:46 PM
This is too cute Debra. I love woodpeckers. They're so pretty with their red heads and mottled body. This little bird was quite confused and figured that was the toughest wood he had ever seen. Great write. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:51 PM
Hi! Judy, I found out that woodpecker's "drum" on metal to attract a mate, they usually will stop after mating season. Thanks for taking the time to read the poem and your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations!
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Kim. Blessings ~ Debra
Alex Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 12:49 AM
"red hard hat", "white overcoat" - picturesque of a woodpecker. Congratulations!
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:46 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Christuraj. Blessings ~ Debra
George Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations Debra on your sweet win in the contest !
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:45 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Vasal. Blessings ~ Debra
Deo Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 7:44 PM
Congrats Debra Brown, Poetess and Nature - Liver, in the Creation that glorifies God. And satisfied good stewards of earth, amen
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:45 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Anil. Blessings ~ Debra
Poet Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Nothing is better than watching nature at work. Congratulations on your win my friend.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Sotto, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 12:57 AM
Hope it could not drill a hole. Must have been fantastic to observe A great poem.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Victor, your words are to kind. Blessings ~ Debra
George Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:17 PM
The woodpecker seems to have been blind folded ! Usually such a mistake, these birds do not make . However you had a chance to watch him from close quarters ! Did he ever suspect that his stupid act will fall in the eyes of a poet and will be turned into a poem...! Really enjoyed. :) :)
George Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 8:48 PM
I have been just joking- :) :)
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:30 PM
Valsa, I enjoyed your comment. I went to YouTube and looked "Woodpeckers drumming on metal". Woodpeckers do "drum" on metal to attract a mate. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Wolf Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:16 PM
That woodpecker was 'looking for love in all the wrong places!' He'll never get a 'medal' that way. lol. :) gw
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:23 PM
HA Ha! Gershon, I wish he would go pester the neighbors (Lol). Thanks for stopping by. Blessings ~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 2:04 PM
LOL - He was dressed for destruction in his red hard hat. Poor bird found the task too hard but watch out, he may bring friends ;)
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 4:05 PM
Hi! Kim, Oh! my, a whole army of red hats, LOL. Thanks, for taking the time to read the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 12:10 PM
It seems that get a delight from pecking on aluminum pipes for some reason. I wonder if they try to peck into electrical transformers? I enjoyed reading this one. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Hi! Sara, I'm not sure about the transformers. But they sure try to peck into the vent pipe. It sounds like a jackhammer in the house (LoL). I enjoyed your comment. Have a blessed weekend. Debra
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Nothing more peaceful than watching nature at work, the beauty of creation. Hope your weekend is going well Debra. Tom
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Hi! Tom, there's not much peace when a woodpecker is pecking into a metal pipe (LoL) it sounds like a jack hammer in the house. Hope you have a Blessed weekend. Debra
Leffanta Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Lucky you! Rat-a-tats should be confined to Chicago! Aloha! (Enjoyed)
Leffanta Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, but I have already heard woodpecker pecking on metal pipes and suggested they move on to Graceland . . ..Aloha!
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Hi! Rico, I enjoyed your comment. You need to listen to a woodpecker tapping into a metal pipe. It can certainly drive you nuts. Have a blessed weekend. Debra
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