The Red Sundress

THE RED SUNDRESS
By
Jack Horne

She tried on her old red sundress
and was young again.
Her figure was slim, her hair was fair
and men would buy her flowers.
She danced to the looking glass.

Her reflection was a real let down.
She had wrinkles and dimples
and rolls of lose flesh:
a caricature of the curvaceous creature
she had once been.

The woman she had been,
when the sundress was new, 
long gone: a stronger woman 
in her place. She smiled at the mirror,
the inner woman smiling back.

For Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~  
Contest 'The Sundress'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 9:26 AM
kind of late, but congratulations on your win for this fine and beautiful write. thank you for commenting on Lilac's At Home.
Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Jack in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Haick Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Awesome, Jack! Like I always believe, in the end truth stands out...her true, inner beauty remained. Congratulations on a deserving win in Constance's Contest! Always, Annalise
Devonshire Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 9:38 AM
I laughed again reading this for the second time, Jack. So happy to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Wonderful write here jack!Congrats on your win---kashinath
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your win Jack in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 11:34 PM
I'm glad she didnn't let that luter woman pull her down. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
K. Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Really liked how you turned everything around in this empowering poem, Jack! What's within is definitely more important :) Congrats on your win with this :)
Mehta Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, jack
Sweetheart Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Way to go Jack .. congrats on your 6th place win in the sundress contest with this awesome piece my friend.. enjoy your top ten win with luv..
Freeman Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Wonderful job Jack, congratulations on your sixth place. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 11:31 AM
A fabulous top-notch free verse, Jack. Sure to be on the winner's circle and thank you for your kind comments. Elaine
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Jack. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Knop Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 1:52 AM
Great poem Jack! Every day i look into my bathroom's mirror, I detect more wrinkles, hahaha! But anyway I won't mind. No botox, no facelifts!!! Best of luck in Constance's contest!....:) Gert
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:10 PM
hmmm, that middle stanza depressing but at least you picked it up with a very uplifing ending! I think you did great with this entry.
La France Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:29 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Jack, with this wonderful poem~~
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 4:15 PM
wrinkles dimples and rolls, this is why I am in no hurry to try on my sundress.... great entry best of luck in the contest
Devonshire Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 3:02 PM
At least she didn't feel sad looking into the mirror and seeing the wrinkles. Her "inner woman" was strong enough to accept age gracefully. Great entry for the contest, Jack. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Beautiful rendition Jack on the sundress in my fav color ..RED.. reminiscent thoughts of days gone by ... good luck in the contest.. and u will need to show Constance's name in full on the poem u enter per her instructions luv.. good luck...
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