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The Red Rose I Am Still- Holding

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I had a dream . . . (at least, I think it was a dream) I was walking in a beautiful garden, and wandering down pretty paths; a church was built right in the center, among all the flowers and lovely green. The door of the church was ornately carved, but a sign hung- DO NOT OPEN THIS DOOR; so, I turned back to the garden, but now, my view was totally different. It was filled with graves, headstones stood instead of beautiful flowers; music drifted in the air, and I could hear and see a funeral was taking place. So, I went and stood with the mourners, who looked down into an open grave; each person was tossing a red rose, tossing it upon a shiny black coffin. Oh, why not, I said, to the girl who is me, just toss one in- and then, I woke up; weeping, weeping, oh I had done this before, yes, we had thrown red roses . . . on my mother's coffin, I look at my hand and the red rose I am still- holding . . . ___________________________ August 29, 2018 Poetry/Verses/The Red Rose I am Still- Holding Copyright Protected, ID 18-1055-775-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 9/8/2018 9:25:00 AM
Ooh this was awash with many emotions and your words had me following all with great intrigue. It reminded me of when Dorothy opened the door to Oz. From the dull, drab gray to the brilliant colors except this poem was in reverse!
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Date: 9/2/2018 10:16:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the beautiful, sadly the contest judge did not seem to like my poem, but oh well ~
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Date: 8/31/2018 7:45:00 AM
A beautifully sad verse, Constance, keep holding on to that memory forever. John
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