The Red Planet

Pyramids are scattered
in a flat plane,
as red dust blows
once in a while.

For millennia,
we have read stories
of "flying fortresses"
or vimanas to Hindus,
"flying shields" to Alexander
the Great,
and "flying eggs" to the Dogon

The distant travelers
were revered as gods from the stars;
gods who know us very well;
gods who are us a million years from now....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Teddy! Brilliant work!
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Wigley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:10 AM
I hope you're wrong, Teddy, we've already made ourselves Gods whilst stuck on this planet, and look what we've done. Great write, well done. Regards, Viv
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:45 AM
You are right on that one Viv. It's like destruction is embedded in our DNA..... I hope we will be more tranquil when we are able to inhabit other worlds out there.... Thank you for your applause! ;-)
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:10 PM
TEDDY Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 12:43 PM
lovely imagery Teddy many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Thanks for your applause and comment Jan! *^_^*
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