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The Reaper Speaks

I have come for you, mortal one the way that I have come each time for anyone! Such is your fate. As surely as you see the sun each day as you stand by your gate to watch the new sun start to climb to sky, I come! There is no crime in what I am about to do. It is your time. I’m taking you. So go ahead and try to fight to go not gently into night. Your ancestors – they too had fought when in my clutches they’d been caught, Know this: I did not write the plot! The tale each mortal must live out is what each life is all about. By Him Supreme I have been sent. There is no time left to repent. You mortals do not know me well. I’m not the bad guy. Look and see beyond this night -beyond the veil. Release! Drift to your destiny. Jan 20, 2020 For strict rhyme and meter challenge Poetry Contest Contest judged. 1/27/2020. NA NOW for Dear Heart's Writing Prompt - Take The Dagger Out Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/22/2020 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place, Andrea-- you and I appear to share a similar, and fairly uncommon view on death, as I expressed something similar in 'Fear Not, Death'.
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Date: 2/22/2020 10:48:00 AM
Andrea, great entry and congratulations _Constance
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:44:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your first place win! So much to consider in your poem, Very nicely done!
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Date: 2/19/2020 6:44:00 PM
Thought provoking! Congrats on your first place in this contest.
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Date: 2/19/2020 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic First Place win Andrea! xxoo
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Date: 2/19/2020 11:15:00 AM
Great to see this come in at #1 in Dear Heart's contest, Andrea.
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Date: 2/2/2020 10:18:00 AM
A skilful, intelligent and eloquent defence of the Reaper. I almost feel sorry for him!
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Date: 1/23/2020 4:55:00 PM
A chilling reminder that we are all at the mercy of destiny Andrea. I loved the nod toward Dylan Thomas in your 11th line. This is a fantastic entry my friend! xxoo
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Date: 1/21/2020 1:58:00 PM
- Impressive masterpiece, Andrea - (I could never have written this ... woow :) - In my eyes you've already topped the list ... once again :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2020 1:02:00 PM
Nice one ...
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Date: 1/21/2020 12:28:00 PM
This is an awesome write. Great story. A perfect presentation. After I read this it made me think of Blue Oyster Cults "Don't Fear The Reaper."
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Date: 1/21/2020 10:14:00 AM
The reaper never fails!, I like how you ended it Andrea, Very nicely done..
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Date: 1/21/2020 9:58:00 AM
You captured the dialogue well here, Andrea..very clever, too! I am struggling to write something interesting in this tricky rhyme scheme. Enjoyed this one! :)
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Date: 1/20/2020 11:50:00 PM
Excellent poem, Andrea - well done on the strict rhyme and meter and working into that structure a nicely flowing and meaningful poem about everyone's ultimate fate. I like how you worked in the Dylan Thomas line! GL in the SOS contest ~ John
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Date: 1/20/2020 5:14:00 PM
There is a song by the rock band Blue Oyster Cult which says "Don't Fear the Reaper". What will our destiny be I wonder? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/20/2020 4:05:00 PM
You did a fantastic job with this unique form, Andrea. Some people do see death as "the bad guy," but he has a role to play and it's an important one. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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