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the thrums of my heart are not now abounding, still, a hush of quietude - death is but an echo ... a soul's tender ripples on the surface of eternity, as it plunges from life … to the depths ... of Heaven. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Eight-Line Poem" Poetry Contest, Rick Parise, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Choice U, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/30/2020 8:23:00 PM

You have written this poem beautifully. a soul's tender ripples, on the surface of eternity. What a beautiful expression. Congratulations. JC Hawkens

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2020 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so very kindly, JC, I greatly appreciate the wonderful comments! Blessings, my friend! :o)

James Inman

Date: 11/21/2017 4:15:00 AM

Gregory, a smooth read with lovely image filled lines.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/1/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, James, I so appreciate that, my friend! (Just saw this comment - please forgive the delay ... I don't seem to get notifications every time, or maybe some are going to my spam box). Blessings!

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/12/2017 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations Gregory...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/14/2017 2:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Charlie! :-)

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/12/2017 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations Gregory...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/14/2017 2:04:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie!

Joseph May

Date: 11/11/2017 6:58:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Gregory

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/11/2017 9:03:00 PM

Very kind of you, Joseph - thanks so much! :-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/11/2017 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this fluid spectacular pen <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/11/2017 9:02:00 PM

You're very sweet, Mo, thank you so very much, Friend! :-) <3

John Michaels

Date: 11/11/2017 6:37:00 AM

Congrats on another great First Place win, Greg. You're building quite a collection! All the best, John.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/11/2017 9:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, John, I greatly appreciate the kind comments! Blessings! :-)

Kristina Whitmore

Date: 11/11/2017 1:42:00 AM

Congrats on the win! Beautiful eight-line poem.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/11/2017 9:01:00 PM

Very kind of you, Kristina - thank you so much! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2017 10:14:00 PM

Very deep... Congratulations on your win, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/10/2017 10:52:00 PM

That's kind of you to say, Line, and I'm pleased you enjoyed it - thank you! :-)

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/10/2017 7:41:00 PM

Gregory, such graceful and delicate beauty in the lines and words of your superb poem. Congratulations on your well deserved top placement!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/10/2017 9:55:00 PM

Thank you very, very much, Susan, that's very kind of you, and I'm glad you liked my poem! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/10/2017 5:42:00 PM

well done on your 1st place with this exquisite poem Gregory and ty for visiting my page hugs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/10/2017 9:54:00 PM

Very sweet of you, Shadow, and I thank you so very much for your kindness - so pleased you liked it! :-) <3

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/10/2017 5:38:00 PM

Congrats!!! my friend...beautifully written Greg...nice job poetic one...I love your style...very graceful...god bless...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/10/2017 9:53:00 PM

Blessings to you, my friend, and thank you so very much for the kind comments - they are never taken for granted! :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2017 5:36:00 PM

Wonderful! Congrats on 1st place Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/10/2017 9:52:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim, I greatly appreciate it! :-)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/5/2017 5:18:00 AM

This is a wonderful write my friend, so beautiful in every aspect! I surely enjoyed what you have written here, you have added a special feeling to my heart by your inspiring words of wisdom and hope! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/5/2017 11:32:00 PM

Oh, thank you so very much, my good friend Russell - you are always so kind, and I am so grateful for you! Blessings, Brother - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :-)