The Raven

Again the raven whose sleek, dark wings shine
sits upon my sagging sleek power line.
His eyes so questioning, he does sure stare.
Does he know something? Do I ask?
Should I dare? 5

Never, ever saying not even one little word
so still and silent, this dark looming bird.
Visits me each and every single day, but never a 
word does he say. My emotions I sense he knows
are mixed with his curious eyes affixed. 10

As the evening sunset finally domes
the dark bird returns to his home.
He leaves me with a feeling of such dread 
I hope tomorrow he will stay home instead. 14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/20/2015 12:36:00 PM
Hello Sharon My Dear Friend!! I like your take here on "The Raven." This dark bird of yore always tends to be an oracle of omens. Your last two verses sum up everything quite well. Enjoyed this one very much!! "Seven"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/17/2015 7:30:00 AM
It happens to me too, at times, Sharon!! (We both have to ensure we capture them though before we publish!!) Hope all is well. Best Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Cheers, Gary
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 11/17/2015 7:19:00 AM
Gary please forgive the typo, I think my key board is getting tired, ha, ha, ha.... Best always, Sharon.
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 11/17/2015 7:17:00 AM
Once again let me say thank you for taking time out of I know your busy schedule to read my work and comment Gay! As always it is so greatly appreciated. Sending warmth and care this Holiday Season....Sharon
Date: 8/31/2015 11:35:00 PM
Those darn Ravens. They a have a bad rap. lol. Nice write Sharon.
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 9/1/2015 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Micheal for the nice comment....Sharon
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