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The Race

Pain is not a garment changed with whims of a fashion style Its heavy, razor edges are both permanent and vile A torture made of illness, loss, of injury, regret That churns and burns and rips the flesh til bloody, sticky, wet. The greatest fighters find the strength to see beyond distress With twisted frames they stagger on, weak battle cries of "yes" When all their body wants to say is "Quit! Give Up! Give in!" But heroes answer back and use the strength that lies within. Shadows cannot appear unless there is a source of light. Victories only come when we have made it through the fight. Sometimes the winner doesn't wear a laurel on his head, The greatest warriors show strength by climbing out of bed. To win the race with perfect legs is naught of exception But just to vie at a crawl deserves a knight's reception.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/19/2019 3:51:00 PM
A strong poem, especially that first stanza.Congrats on the win, Cindi!
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Date: 2/16/2019 11:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Cindi. Well done.
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Date: 2/16/2019 8:01:00 PM
Cindi, this is glorious! the message and the beauty and flow of all the words you strung together like pearls! This is a FAV for me. Congratulations!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/16/2019 9:40:00 PM
Wow! Thank you, P.S. You are swelling my head! lol ~Cindi~
Date: 2/16/2019 4:31:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Cindi, with an inspiring and meaningful message. Congratulations on your fine placement in this marathon contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/16/2019 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Sandra!
Date: 2/16/2019 3:42:00 PM
Artfully portrayed in, for the most part, iambic heptameter. So you kicked it up a notch from just rhyme. Love the uplifting message.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/16/2019 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Craig.
Date: 2/16/2019 1:06:00 PM
Cindi, I love this, because even though it starts out dark and gritty, it celebrates the realities of life! Well done! Congratulations on your win on Mile 18 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 2/16/2019 2:19:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/26/2016 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Cindi! ...Fran
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 9/27/2016 12:29:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/26/2016 7:03:00 PM
wonderfully written Cindi...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 9/26/2016 8:13:00 PM
Thank you!

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