The Race

Pain is not a garment changed with whims of a fashion style
Its heavy, razor edges are both permanent and vile
A torture made of illness, loss, of injury, regret
That churns and burns and rips the flesh til bloody, sticky, wet.

The greatest fighters find the strength to see beyond distress
With twisted frames they stagger on, weak battle cries of "yes"
When all their body wants to say is "Quit! Give Up! Give in!"
But heroes answer back and use the strength that lies within.

Shadows cannot appear unless there is a source of light.
Victories only come when we have made it through the fight.
Sometimes the winner doesn't wear a laurel on his head,
The greatest warriors show strength by climbing out of bed.

To win the race with perfect legs is naught of exception 
But just to vie at a crawl deserves a knight's reception.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Carber Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:51 PM
A strong poem, especially that first stanza.Congrats on the win, Cindi!
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 11:04 PM
Congrats on your win, Cindi. Well done.
Awtry Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Cindi, this is glorious! the message and the beauty and flow of all the words you strung together like pearls! This is a FAV for me. Congratulations!
Rockwell Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 9:40 PM
Wow! Thank you, P.S. You are swelling my head! lol ~Cindi~
Haight Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Beautifully expressed, Cindi, with an inspiring and meaningful message. Congratulations on your fine placement in this marathon contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rockwell Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Thank you Sandra!
Cornish Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Artfully portrayed in, for the most part, iambic heptameter. So you kicked it up a notch from just rhyme. Love the uplifting message.
Rockwell Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Thank you, Craig.
Toney Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 1:06 PM
Cindi, I love this, because even though it starts out dark and gritty, it celebrates the realities of life! Well done! Congratulations on your win on Mile 18 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Rockwell Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Thanks!
Grasso Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations, Cindi! ...Fran
Rockwell Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Thanks!
Scars Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:03 PM
wonderfully written Cindi...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Rockwell Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Thank you!
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