The Quietist Hour

With my mouth
Gone quiet
So to the light
With a click
I lay my head down
Waiting for the quietest hour
I close my eyes
And see again
The day’s events
From woe to go
And back again
I question my responses
Acknowledge new guilt’s
And pay homage to old
Finally
My mind is done with this day
As I wait for the quietest hour
It now has
The space it needs
To flourish and meander
Toward that 
Stillest hour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Like this poem, excellent write..
Middleton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thanks Harry for reading my poem and commenting. Will follow it up with no2.
Moore Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:43 PM
So true I can count on one hand how much sleep I have had in the last couple days. Good job
Middleton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Well this next poem (QH2) Jay will be even less sleep.
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