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The Quietist Hour

With my mouth Gone quiet So to the light With a click I lay my head down Waiting for the quietest hour I close my eyes And see again The day’s events From woe to go And back again I question my responses Acknowledge new guilt’s And pay homage to old Finally My mind is done with this day As I wait for the quietest hour It now has The space it needs To flourish and meander Toward that Stillest hour

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Date: 10/25/2018 3:59:00 PM
Like this poem, excellent write..
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 10/25/2018 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Harry for reading my poem and commenting. Will follow it up with no2.
Date: 10/25/2018 3:43:00 PM
So true I can count on one hand how much sleep I have had in the last couple days. Good job
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 10/25/2018 7:09:00 PM
Well this next poem (QH2) Jay will be even less sleep.

Book: Shattered Sighs